DON'T QUIT
By: Abigail, 9 (aka LOLLIPOP12345 )
Today
I read a poem that had a life long lesson in it,
don’t quit and never give up. I think the author is
trying to tell me that when you do something, never
give up, because when you have reached your goal you
will feel very successful. When I have to clean the
house with my mom and sister I don’t want to, but
once it is clean, I feel good about myself. Also, if
you are frustrated, you need to keep trying because
your goal to be accomplished could be right around
the corner. If you stop, you won’t succeed and reach
your goal. You might think something is hard but it
is only because you think it’s hard. I think the
author is trying to inspire people to never give up
and always keep trying. Everybody should go
confidently in the direction of their dreams and
know that success is a journey, not a destination.
You should never settle for less than your best. My
opinion is that the author should have focused on
one main idea, but the author wrote the poem so it
applied to everyone. To me it applies to learning.
It made me think of learning in a different way. It
will help me think outside the box and stretch my
thinking onto a different level. I do agree that the
author could have said the poem more clearly. The
author could have chosen one subject and elaborated
on that one point. If this was my poem, I would have
focused on one main idea. I also would apply it to
someone my age. For example, if it was on learning I
would have said to not quit on learning new math
skills like multiplication, geometry and many other
skills. Also, remember to not quit during challenges
in math and in other subjects. When I learn a new
multiplication fact and I can’t memorize it, I don’t
give up and keep trying. When I write a really short
paragraph, I keep trying and trying to elaborate on
that one subject. I like the poem; it really made me
think how it related to my life and other people.
Always remember to never give up, keep trying but
don’t quit at anything because once you are
finished, you will feel very successful at what you
did. |